Prologue
This
is a story for early teens to young adults that allows them to walk through the
process of biblical interpretation by story. A story often engages the heart
and mind in a way that teaching, sermon and lecture will not. This story is particularly
about a young boy named Daniel, who grows up in a desert tribe that is running
out of water. Daniel’s father bequeaths him a map that leads him to fresh
water. Daniel
takes the map, and invites his friends along, on the adventure. Throughout he
the must learn about:
Chapter 2 -Meaning –
Chapter 3 -History of
Interpretation-
Chapter 4 -Interpretation
Questions-
Chapter 5 -Psalms-
Chapter 6 -Wisdom-
Chapter 7 -Genres-
Chapter 8 -Epistles-
Along
the way, Daniel and his friends are also confronted with lessons about faith,
relationships, and ultimately coming to know the Scriptures in a meaningful
way. Though the interpretation method is a process learned throughout the
story—an engaged reader can learn rich lessons of both interpretation and
practice all at once. A teenager and young adult will walk through this story,
relating to the characters, and realizing the power of the Scriptures to guide
daily life. So join Daniel, as he discovers Meaning, Interpretation, Psalms,
Wisdom, Genres and Epistles and comes to know Yahweh and His work in a whole
new way.
Chapter 1
Chapter 1
A Change of Pace
Daniel
tossed his hammer aside and wiped the sweat from his brow. His father had
instructed him to fix the weak stakes around the tent. Now his back ached from
bending, pounding, digging and fixing. Every inch of him was wet from the heat
of the afternoon sun. He heard his mother stirring copper pots near their
tent. The pots bubbled with lamb;
He was certain she was making a special dinner for father. Daniel leaned back
on his haunches and surveyed his work.
He
had been able to secure two of six weakened stakes. The dry ground just kept
cracking and letting the supports bend and loosen. “I wish father could just
take care of this himself!” Daniel thought. Even with the cliffs in the
distance, no shade could reach the desert ground. Still, he spent the rest of
the afternoon working, until two more stakes were secured. Then his mother
called him in.
They
ate together around a low table set up close to father. The meal was silent and
Daniel waited nervously until his father took bread, dipped it and then ate.
The air was hung with heaviness. His mother and sister barely spoke most of the
meal, until his father did.
“Daniel,
you know what this meal is not for me.” His voice was deep, but strained. “It
is for you.”
Daniel nodded, unsure of what to say. His mother and sister kept their eyes on
father. “I am getting worse. This could be my last meal before I pass. I asked
your mother to cook it because,” He coughed roughly, and breathed deep. “This
meal is my heritage to you.
Daniel
took a deep breath, and spoke respectfully, “I understand, father.”
“Daniel,”
His father continued, “You are now the head of this home. You are fifteen, and
your mother and I believe that you are capable.” He sipped the lamb broth, and
some caught in his fraying beard. “You will be the man of the house when I am gone.”
Daniel’s mother cupped her hand over her mouth, and began to weep.
His
sister whimpered, “Daddy...don t go, not yet...” and she broke into soft sobs.
“Tania,”
Her mother whispered, “Don’t make this harder on him. He wants this to be
special for Daniel.” Daniel felt the weight of the room on his shoulders; he
didn’t know what to say. Daniel s father turned his attention to his daughter.
“Tania,
I need you to listen to Daniel like you’ve listened to me.” Tania leaned her
head close, and placed it her father s great shoulder. “And I need you to learn
everything you can from your mother. She’ll need your help. And one day soon
you’ll be just like her.”
“I
will.” She nodded, “I will learn everything I can from mother. And I will
listen to Daniel too.” Her mother brushed tears from her eyes. Daniel tried to
think of something to say to his father. Something to let him know how much he
would miss him.
“Okay,
Tania, escort your mother out of the room. I need to talk to Daniel one on
one.”
“Alright,”
Tania sighed deeply. She took her mothers arm and they left together. Daniel s
father turned toward him.
“Daniel,
You’ve barely eaten anything.” His father observed. “I know all this must be
overwhelming for you. I’m certain it’s hard seeing me sick.” Daniel looked at
his father, sickly, weak, tired, and yet so concerned for him. “But I am
looking out for your best, and the best for our family. It is overwhelming as a
young man to think of taking this on. You are small, and the drought is
starving the whole tribe. I would feel helpless if I were you.”
Daniel
sighed, and nodded, “It is, father.” He managed to eek out without crying. “I
don’t know what to do.”
“It
is okay, son. You are now a man. I have given you a home and a family. You
don’t have to have all the answers. You will learn. You are great at that; I’ve
watched you do it your whole life!” His father smiled. “Daniel, I wanted to
speak with you one on one because there is something you need to know. You are now the man of the house,
and you will
need to make big decisions for our family.” His father lifted from beneath the
table an old parchment rolled into a scroll. “For some time I have held onto
this map.” Daniel heard the history in his voice. “It is very valuable to me
and to your mother because it shows us where we can find water.” Daniels eyes
widened.
Why
have you held onto it? Haven’t you shown anyone?” Daniel wondered.
“Oh,
we did, or at least talked about it with the town, years ago.” His father’s
eyes closed as he drifted back to the memories. “But the town didn’t t want
anything to do with it.”
“Why
not? People are dying without fresh water”
“Well,
this water the map leads to, it is powerful, and takes a great heart to find
it. Most of the men in town didn’t think it existed. Those who did thought it
was impossible to find without dying. No one thought it was worth it.” His
father opened the map, revealing specific signs and instructions. There were
images of a cave, a tribe, a letter and a door.
“I
always heard that another tribe cut off our water source. That we are in
drought because of them.”
“That
is true too, his father said, but do not be fooled, son, it is also because of
us. It takes a brave man to seek this out. And you will have to make that
decision for our family soon. I did my best to let our tribe know the truth now
you may have to save our family from the consequences.”
“What
do I need to know?” Daniel inquired. Something inside him lit up. “Tell me the
way”
“Ah,
son. I love your passion, but you will need more than passion to find this
water. I will give you some clues, but you must use your mind; let wisdom
guide, she will not fail.” His father laid both palms on the map s edges.
“First, you must know the Big picture, and never forget it. Without this map to
give you context, you will be lost anywhere you go.” Daniel nodded in
understanding. “Then, you must go to each of these places He pointed to the
images, the cave, the tribe, and the letter. Each one is a sacred place. The
ancients thought that Yahweh spoke to those who went there. You must seek those
places out and learn why they are important. You must go to the context and understand
it; only then will you be led to the water.” Daniel could imagine himself,
trekking from unknown to unknown. “There are clues written by each image they
will guide you in you quest.” His father coughed roughly. “But most important.
You must understand that others have gone before you and found water. They have
written clues for you too. Pay good attention to these and always put them in
context of the map’s instructions.” Daniel looked at his father’s tired eyes.
“Lastly, Daniel, you must memorize this song, it was my mother s, who gave the
map to me—His father s weak voice sang out:
Let the water spring forth
from the ancient stories
Listen to their voices and
remember where they’ve been
It was their time, their
place, their authors, who
Provide the meaning that s
flowing within
And listen son, to the deeper
drum,
It s a revelation into your
soul
For in their voices lies the
ancient song of old
For in their voices lies the
ancient song of old
There is one who comes to give
life
his waters stream from the
endless springs of time
Wisdom flows from the word,
cave, tribe
Trust in him who will give you
truth through these signs.
And listen son, to the deeper
drum,
It s a revelation into your
soul
For in their voices lies the
ancient song of old
For in their voices lies the
ancient song of old
The
sounds flowed over Daniel like refreshing waves in the warm evening. He was
brightened even hearing such a story from his father. His father always held
such deep convictions. He spoke so often to their family about Yahweh, and His
presence with them. Daniel even heard his father praying late into the night,
especially since his sickness has gotten worse. Even though Daniel didn’t
really understand the story. He knew it was valid, because he knew his father.
The
two talked for a while longer until his mother came in and urged them to rest.
Daniel went to bed feeling so relieved at the trust his father placed in him.
Maybe he could handle being head of the house but the deep ache of missing his
father seeped into those thoughts. He waited to let the depth of those reach
his eyes.
Chapter 2
An Adventure Begins
It
was only a few days later that Daniel’s tears flowed free. The whole tribe
gathered together by a tomb carved into a nearby cavern. His mother and sister
wept with him and moaned as they sang sad songs. A few men came up later to
affirm Daniel’s new role in his family, and to encourage him with high opinions
of his father. This didn’t do much to help him, other than make him feel a bit
less equipped.
It
was strange to see his mother alone. Though she kept up pace, pouring much of
her attention into Tania. Daniel slowly learned the needs around the house and
began to grow up into his father s position. It wasn’t for many months later,
after his 16th birthday, that the drought began to get worse. He watched the
men of the town huddle around full of anxiety. Theories for the causes and the
worsening of it all spread like wildfire throughout their tribe. Daniel
gathered together with a few of his closest friends near the towns well, which
by this time was in months of completely drying up. He had a plan. And he
brought his father s map to back him up.
Dust
was growing when Collom, Meldon, Alkin, and Caris arrived. Most families were
gathering for dinner, but these five were together under Daniel s request. He
spoke in a soft voice, “Alright, what I have to tell you is of utmost
importance. I asked each of you here because you have been my friends for a
long time, and I trust you.” Everyone nodded and a hushed. He continued, “My
father passed away six month ago. And I have taken over his role as the leader
of my house. Since the drought has gotten worse, others are getting concerned.
Some are grumbling, but others are threatening to break up our tribe and
cutting off the weak. With everything happening, I have the feeling that our
tribe won’t last long without fresh water.”
“Yes,
my father is an elder I heard them arguing about, when the times comes, who
should die first.” Said Meldon, a little scared himself, “It sounded like the
women, especially the old, are the first to go. I know my family will be okay,
since my father is an elder, but I don t think it s right to let people die.”
“Yes,
but we re all going to die soon,” interrupted Collom, “And some believe there
isn’t any water left anywhere once the well is dry.”
It’s
better the weaker ones go first,” Alkin added, “At least we’ll have a chance of
the strong finding water sometime.” He gestured to himself.
“You
know we can t leave the town without a house-hold leader, Alkin.” Meldon
hesitatingly reminded, and I don t think any of our fathers are wanting to die
apart from their families.”
The
strong voice of Caris injected, “Collom, Alkin, Meldon, you need to remember no
one knows where water is. And even so, they couldn’t find it. If we went
anywhere near the far tribe they would tear us apart. And they have the only
land with water!” Alkin growled at her
insight. She turned to Daniel and smiled, “Let s hear what Daniel has to say I
m sure there’s a reason he called this meeting.”
“Yes
there is. There was a lot of trouble in our parents past with what I m about to
tell you. It has to do with fresh water. And it is extremely important that you
all keep this a secret between us. Will you?” They all agreed, then huddled a
bit closer. Daniel withdrew the ancient map from his pocket. He explained to
them everything his father had told him their last meal together. He shared
with them the words of the song. And what he had figured out recently while
considering the adventure he was about to propose.
“So,
here s what I intend. I think the map is true, and that the images of the cave,
the cliffs, the letter and the door are real. And, since I am the head of my
household, I can leave the camp whenever I want. And I can bring whomever I
want with me.” They all paused for a second, considering what Daniel was
suggesting. “So, I want you four to accompany me on the adventure to find fresh
water. Collom, you are the strongest friend I have we’ll need you to carry most
of the supplies. Meldon, you have the best insights on the religion of the
elders since your father is one of them as we encounter clues; you can give us
history on past decisions. Alkin, you and I have been friends the longest, and
you are the most passionate person I know we will need your inspiration to
endure. And Caris, you have wisdom like my father, and I know he liked you. You
will be the only woman in our group, and you will help with every decision.
“And
you expect us to believe this nonsense!” Alkin balked. “I am your oldest
friend, so I’ll be honest; this map is just a old fable from your father s
childhood. Why should we trust it? And risk our lives for it!”
“Yea,
Daniel,” Collom wondered too, “This map could have been made by anyone. What if
the only reason your father gave you the map was to stir your heart and mind?
To give you some hope?”
“Yes,
maybe it s not important what the map says,” added Meldon, who was already
worried about the adventure. “Maybe the cave on the map is really our well, and
the tribe is our tribe, and the letter is our laws, and the door...umm...well,
I m sure it means something.” Meldon tripped over his words as Alkin took the
flow. Daniel was caught off guard at their theorizing.
“Yea,
what if the map is really about our town, maybe the water is right here, and
all we need to do it just realize it.” Alkin half jested and half considered
his own idea.
“I
don t know Alkin,” Meldon was took his suggestion seriously, “I think it s much
more about inspiring us, waking us up. Just like when my father leads the elder
gatherings, they speak to wake up the listeners. I think the inspiration we’re
already experiencing is the best indicator the map is already working. We don t
need to go anywhere.” Meldon wandered off on his own idea, but Daniel saw how
easily he cowered from the quest. And Alkin already had taken a strong stance
that the map gave meaning to their tribe, “the water is right here!” He kept passionately
urging. Collom backed off, a little confused at their various interpretations
and kept mumbling, “I’m not sure if we can really know what it means, guys.”
Caris voice again reigned in their chaos.
“Friends,
this is preposterous. Meldon and Alkin, you are greatly confusing Collom. And
you are insulting Daniel s father with you nonsense. How can this map have more
than one interpretation? It’s a map, it s meant to lead somewhere.” Daniel was extremely
thankful for Caris insight. “And it is meant to lead somewhere real.”
“What
if that real place is our tribe!” Alkin proposed.
“No.
That cannot be, Alkin.” Caris rebutted, “For one thing, why would someone
create a map for water if it was already right here? The map would be pointless
and our tribe would already have water. I know you are passionate, but you can
be passionately wrong. And you’ll be wasting all our time searching for water
with a map that tells you to find water elsewhere.” Alkin shut his mouth. “Be
passionate about what the map is telling you, not the other way around.” He
grumbled beneath his breath, but had nothing to say back to Caris.
“And
second, Meldon, you are just afraid of this adventure.” Caris noticed. Daniel
raised his eyebrows at Caris bluntness. Meldon shriveled. She continued, “Why
would this map be only to inspire us and make us feel good? How is it good if
we are going to die without water? That wouldn’t be good at all; it would be
deceiving. You are using your own interpretation of the map to avoid what it is
literally says, because you are scared.” Meldon gave an innocent laugh; he knew
she saw right through him.
“Caris,
this is why I want you on this adventure.” Daniel blurted out. The others were
still hesitant but Daniel seemed exhilarated. “My father believed this map was
literal. And I believe it is literal. It came from the ancients, who found
water at these sacred places where Yahweh dwells and that is where we need to
go! The town denied this years ago, and look how they are suffering from
drought and dehydration. Do you want to end up like them? We can bring life to
everyone, if we just trust this map and see where it leads. Who is with me?”
Daniel put a brave hand in the middle of the group. Caris’ hand met his
instantly. Collom was a quick third. With Meldon slowly placing his in with a
sigh. Lastly Alkin warned, “If we go through with this stupid map, and the
water ends up being here, I m going to strangle all of you!” With that he
placed his hand in.
“Well,”
Daniel instructed, “then we shall leave in two mornings. Collom, you gather a
weeks worth of supplies. Meldon, you talk to your father over the next two days
and find out as much information about the elder’s decision to not seek the
water, and anything else significant. Alkin, Caris, and I will work on the
details of the trip over the next two nights. We will meet back here at the
well before dawn. Let s get ready, and hope that Yahweh, who my father
worshiped, will guide us till then.” They all said goodnight to each other for
the night stars were already draped overhead. They reminded Daniel of a vast
map, and he wondered if Yahweh used them to find His way around the world? He
lay in bed excited and barely able to sleep. He thought of how glad his father
would be that they were going to find fresh water. “I bet he would have come
with us if he could.” Daniel thought before he drifted off to sleep.
Chapter 3
What Mother Knows
The
next day Daniel s mother was finishing lunch and he was on his way out to meet
with Collom and Caris.
“Daniel,
I need to speak with you before you go” She asked of him.
“Mother,
I’m really in a hurry. Caris and Alkin are waiting for me.” He said anxiously.
“I
know you are busy. But I need to speak with you.” She was calm. She was always
so solemn since father passed.
“Can’t
it wait until tomorrow?” He begged.
“Will
you be here tomorrow, Daniel?” She caught him off guard, “I get the sense that
you are leaving. Why haven t you said anything?”
“Oh,
mother, you wouldn’t understand. I am leaving, but it’s because of something father told be
before he died.”
“Then
it can’t be something I don’t already know.”
“I
doubt it this time, mother.” Daniel drew in a deep, patient breath, “He shared
this with me on the night he made me head of the house.”
“Your
father and I shared everything.” She paused, and raised her eyebrows, “I m
guessing this has to do with our map.” His mother s confident suggestion left
Daniel dumbfounded.
“But...”
He had no words, and then blurted, “If you knew, why didn’t you talk to me
about it?”
“You
are the head of the house now, Daniel,” She coolly responded, “Your father and
I thought you could handle the map on your own. Who am I to approach you on it
when we gave it to you?
“We? You and father both decided to
give it to me? Why didn’t father say anything about you knowing in the first
place?” Daniel struggled to put the pieces together of his secret mission that
seemed not so secret anymore.
“I
think that was your father’s first move in allowing you to be man of the house.
He respected you enough to trust that you would come to me if you needed.” She
filled in the gaps with the motherly tone that only wise mothers know. Daniel,
beginning to understand, was filled with intrigue at his mother s timing.
“How
did you know I was actually going, mother? How did you figure it out?” Daniel
was almost laughing inside. His mother was the most careful woman he knew. She
kept a tight home, clean meals, and had a strong, encouraging, watchful eye. He
was a fool to think he could hide their adventure from her.
“It
was only a matter of time, dear. Once you’re father gave you the map, and told
you about our early efforts to sway the tribe, I figured you d be out the door
in a few months!” She looked into his eyes with a smile. “It seems you’re a bit
slow. I’ve been waiting on you.” She toyed affectionately with him.
“I
should have thought you d find out. I’m sorry, mother. I never should have
hidden this from you.
“No.
You shouldn’t have. But it’s all right. You are actually doing a great job as
head of our home. I know you're doing this to protect our family, particularly
Tania and me.” He felt the sweetness of her affirmation, especially since it
meant the absence of her husband; a grief that deeply connected them. She
whispered to him with a wink, “I should like to head out with you, were it not
for Tania.” They both laughed.
Daniel
attempted to mend his earlier attitude as his mother served lunch, “Oh, and don
t worry about Caris and Collom, they can wait. I’ll tell them I was doing
research” They began to eat and talk, “Mother, why didn’t you and father leave
when you were young and follow the map yourselves?” Daniel wondered. She nodded
at the insight of his question.
“Well,
that was a hard decision for your father and I. Let me fill you in on a bit of
history, and I think it will all make sense." As his mother spoke her
voice soften, like a rippling stream. It felt to Daniel like her ancient words
swirled and moved back and forth over them. It was like the riddles of prophecy
weighed down in a secret anticipation, inexplicable and old. He drew back, as if
listening to a song, and soaked in his mother's rhythmic words.
"This
map that you hold comes from an ancient culture. They were devout people, full
of mystery. Their story was ordinary like ours, until Yahweh swept them up into
His. Yahweh, even older than the oldest tribe, chose them to reveal His heart
to all the tribes in the world. This was a mystery greater than anyone had
known.
"Of
course, this seemed ludicrous to the other nations—but Yahweh delivered that
ancient tribe again and again from everything that threatened them. Yahweh even
delivered that tribe when that they rejected Him. He brought them home like a
father does for a lost son. He tended to them, and made them know Him, and
blessed them.
"Soon,
a new thing happened, one that they had waited for generations. A man came who
claimed to be the son of their Yahweh, a man from their tribe. Yet, after so
many years of waiting, they rejected him, and killed him.
"But,
Yahweh surprised them, and raised His son to life again. Some of the tribes’
people claimed that the son is Yahweh. Others were not so sure. We do know one
thing though, this son and this tribe, they are the ones who have written this
map. It has been handed down for generations to our people."
"This
is the map we showed to the elder council when we were a young couple. We urged
them to seek the water that it leads to, but they denied it. They did not think
that this water could be found. And especially if it meant mingling with the
tribe on the map."
His
mother's face got serious and grave, "Daniel, many people will tell you
how to read this map. They did for your father and I. It took us years to sort
through their theories. Remember, these theories comes less from their minds
then from their hearts. Some will try to convince you it is an allegory for our
own tribe, others will whittle it down to scruples and stale bread, others will
say that the images contain hidden meanings, others that the meaning flows from
your thoughts of it. The elders especially will say you must consult their
council alone about this, and a few in our tribe will dismiss any meaning in
this map.
“You
must be diligent—trust that the map has meaning in it. It was written by the
ancient tribe, by those who knew Yahweh, and Yahweh placed Himself in this map.
As you follow it, fresh waters will fill your soul. Bring those back to the
tribe—maybe then they will understand its power."
"You
mean that Yahweh, who father talked about, has placed Himself in this map? How
could He do that?" Daniel wondrously exclaimed, looking over the ordinary
parchment.
"Because,
dear," His mother heart compelled him to listen, "Yahweh is a spirit,
and this map is written through human spirits who served Him completely. It is
infused with His spirit." She paused in thought, "But there is one
other thing..." She placed a loving hand on his shoulder. "May I ask
something of you Daniel?"
"Yes,
mother. Anything." He was gripped by her conviction.
"I
want to ask Yahweh something for you...for His spirit to come into you and lead
you." She spoke deeply, like the words arose from her heart. "And
that He will help you to follow this map, and read it in truth, so that you may
hear 'in their voices...the ancient song of old'.” He recognized his father’s
song. “Daniel, I want you to know Yahweh, but you must want to know Him
too." Daniel paused at her beckoning thoughts. This whole thing sounded so
close. Was
Yahweh someone who he could trust? At first he thought it was just a map and a
quest. It gave every indication of being permanent—like an adventure from which he
could return home. "What am I getting into?" He wondered inside.
"I
think I would like to know Yahweh." Daniel whispered. "I know father
loved Him, and I trust him, and I trust you." He pondered for another
moment, "And I need Yahweh. I could die looking for fresh water. And I'm already
confused hearing all those other voices. How else can I follow the map without
the mapmaker?"
So
Daniel and his mother spoke softly together. And Daniel felt an ora of
excitement and deep meaning fill his stomach. He was both satisfied and hungry
all at once. He was caught up in wordless thoughts.
"I
think you'd better be going." He mother said with a gentle laugh.
"Oh,
yes..." It was like coming out of a dream. Something beautiful had occurred,
but he didn't know what exactly.
"Before
you go, take this," she had written some words on a small, rolled
parchment. "You must read this, as a reminder on your adventures..."
"Shall
I take this as your blessing, mother?" He smiled. "Of course."
She smiled, "And you have Yahweh's too."
"Thank
you!" He said, leaving his mother with a kiss and bouncing out the door.
The
Evening cool was already setting
in over the dusty landscape. He thought, "Caris and Alkin need to hear
this!" Yahweh entered his mind as the orange sun spread our like great
caring arms over their tents. "This map will change our lives."
Chapter 4
A Deeper Friendship
Daniel
had shared his mother's story with Alkin and Caris the night before, as they
discussed plans for the adventure. The freshness was still so profound for
Daniel that Alkin joked about his eyes being wide, and it being a
"story". Caris was quiet for most of his enthusiasm—caught up in his
wide eyes, and ready to hear a bit more about Yahweh. She saw that where before
Daniel was nervous to even meet, the danger involved in this adventure was now
little in Daniel's eyes. Once they finished the itinerary, Alkin headed home,
but not before joking, "Well Daniel, if you haven't already gone crazy,
then this adventure just might do it."
Caris
stayed afterwards to talk. "You're mother's words are breathtaking."
She exclaimed. "I didn't want to say too much with Alkin around, but I've
wondered about your parents before. They've always been so strange—in a quirky,
wonderful way."
"Yea,
I never really thought about it very much until today." Daniel laughed,
"But as my mother told me their history—I couldn't stop thinking about my
father. He was solid. The rock of our family. I was so scared when he got
sick." Caris noticed his sincerity. "But now, after talking with my
mother, I see how he could be so strong...I think Yahweh gave him
strength."
"He
was always so kind to me,” Caris said. "And your mother was too. I wish my
parents would listen to me and care for me like yours."
"Yea,
well, at least you still have your father," Daniel added.
"But
what good is it? My mother and father hate each other." Her eyes were
filled with loneliness. "We live with each other like ghosts. We don't
talk at meals. My mother doesn't teach me anything like Tania learns. And my
father would never give me anything of his— especially something he cared
deeply for like your father. He cared about you so much." Caris saw her
thoughts helped to deepen Daniel's.
"I
never really thought of my father's map showing care for me. I guess I always
thought he made me man of the house because there was no one else..." He
shyly laughed.
"No
way,"
Caris encouraged, "I know two of families who lost a father from the
drought, and they had brothers come in an care for the widows. Your father was
brave to put you in charge. I don't mean to downplay you, but you are still
young. He must have really trusted Yahweh!" She laughed.
"Yes,"
Daniel laughed too, "I think he did." They laughed together, and
paused a moment, looking at the stars poking out from underneath the night sky.
"Daniel,"
She was thoughtful, "Do you think Yahweh would care for me? Like your
father did for you?" He was fascinated at her courage. Her question was
insightful, honest and brave. She trembled a bit. It seemed like the energy of
asking had sucked her dry. He looked at her.
"Yes."
He spoke with his whole heart. "Yes, even more than my father, or
anyone." He saw her countenance soothing. "Caris, I think Yahweh has
more care than we can imagine. He cares for you so much."
"It's
hard to picture," She admitted. "Really. It's hard for me to think
about. I can only think of how lonely it is at home...there is such a void. We
have no love around us."
"Caris,
I want to ask you something." Daniel trembled, thinking of her, "I
want to ask Yahweh to take you as his daughter. I want to ask Him to love you
like a father." Caris stared at the dust beneath their feet. She drew a
deep breath.
"I
would love that, Daniel,” She whispered. A tear dripped from her eye. “But do
you think He would want me?”
“I
think He’s wanted to be with you for a long time.” He smiled.
They
talked together in hushed voices by the corral outside of her family’s tent.
And as the darkness settled over them, Daniel swore he could see a new
brightness in her eyes.
Before
they left, Daniel offered, "Caris, I know this adventure is going to be
hard. But I'm glad you're coming. I need a friend like you." She smiled,
larger than he had ever seen.
"Me
too, Daniel" And she opened the tent flap to walk in, "I don't think
we'll come back the same." She laughed.
"Too
late," He smiled. She nodded and left him alone and full hearted in the
night. "Thank you, Yahweh" He said in a whisper to the stars—and he
swore they twinkled back in delight.
Daniel
unrolled his mother's parchment before bed. It warmed his heart to remember
their conversation, as he read her notes out loud to himself. He fell asleep
considering the adventures to come:
Some Motherly Advice
Whenever interpreting the map,
ask yourself these questions:
1. What does this tell me
about Yahweh?
Remember, this is Yahweh's
story that He wrote to His tribe. He was revealing Himself to them. Since you
have Yahweh's Spirit, you can understand His heart in history.
2. What does this tell me
about His story with the ancient tribe?
Remember, this was written to
an ancient people. There will be tricks to help you interpret along the way.
But always trust the tribe of the map so that you may hear 'in their
voices...the ancient song of old'.
3. What does this teach me
about me and my friends?
Remember, noticing God's heart
and His people will help you to know which part of the map to follow. Follow
the truth, you'll find always lead the right direction!
4. What part of this can I carry
with me?
Yahweh has made you capable of
receiving and understanding Him and His story—so take a piece with you and hold
it in your mind and heart throughout the day. This will keep your heart in the
right place—and give you consistent insight into its direction.
You are so precious, my son.
I know your father is so proud
of you, and I am too... return to us soon.
Chapter 5
The Hall of Songs
Daniel,
Caris, Alkin, Meldon and Collom gathered by the well before dawn.
"Alright,"
Daniel whispered, the early morning chill still clinging to his breath.
"We're all here. The itinerary is set. Collom gathered our supplies.
Alkin, Caris and I decided that the map leads us first to the cave—so that is
our destination. It is about a full days hike from here to the base of the
mesas. If all goes well, we will set up camp outside the cave tonight. Tomorrow
we will attempt to interpret the map and explore the cave." Everyone
picked up their packs. Meldon had brought one of his father's small donkeys to
carry his weight—everyone else helped each other. They were soon hiking into
the soft light of new morning.
They
ate...(food), and shared a small supply of water Collom had gathered from the
well. It wasn't until dark that they saw the silhouette of a large mesa against
the night sky. And shortly after were able to set up camp, roast a bit of lamb,
and rub their aching feet. Caris told them a quick story around the crackling
fire; Collom and Meldon drifted off before she finished. After Caris' story,
Daniel and Alkin imagined what the cave might hold: treasures, bats, pitfalls,
mazes, streams or secret, undiscovered passageways. Their minds eventually led
them to dreams—all five slept soundly.
Daniel
arose in dawn's light. He sat on his own and examined the image of the cave
carefully. He memorizing the surrounding notes so that they could better
navigate inside. They read like this:
In our songs our rhythm our
words
Stand prayers to Yahweh with
voices unheard
Our hearts break with Him in
daily pieces
And still he breaths in us new
graces
Sometimes we sing Him a bright
hallelujah
Sometimes we share a His
ancient stories
And in the darkness, we know
we can trust Him cause darkness and light are alike to Him.
Even in this we breathe His
knowledge unending how in wisdom he created all of the earth
She is the one who shared in
his structure
And it's through her that we
find His worth.
Hallelujah we praise the
ancient almighty
Whose song we echo in
heart-full praise
Let us come now and bow as
creatures before Him
And let His wisdom and songs
be raised.
He
had Caris assist him on the second verse.
"Daniel,"
Caris reflected, "I really like the line, "our hearts break with
Him in daily pieces"
something about breaking with Yahweh really stands out to me." Daniel knew
it was because of her family. He couldn't imagine how hard being in a loveless
home. But he kept this to himself.
"Yea, and it's amazing that
'He still breathes in us new graces,’" Daniel added. "It sounds like the fresh
waters to me that we're looking for." He smiled at her. They knew they had
found something special together.
Caris and Daniel continued to
rehearse each verse as they packed up camp. Collom had brought a torch soaked
in oil, which he lit on some smoldering ashes. They ate a few dried pieces of
fruit and hiked the short distance to the cave.
The
mesa was the color of rust and the cave was a slit in the mesa's side. "If
we didn't have this map, we could have easily wandered by this..." Daniel
thought as they walked closer. Daniel slipped in first, with the torch. The
rest of the group following one by one. Meldon squeezed in fifth, waiting till
the last moment to enjoy the safe, sunlit sky.
The
inside of the cave was fairly large—and would have been completely dark if not
for Collom's torch.
"So...this
is it, huh." Meldon wondered, as his eyes adjusted. "I guess this is
what I imagined. It is really dark though..." His voice quivered and squeaked a bit.
"It'll
be fine,
Meldon." Alkin derided. "This is what we have a map for, right
Daniel." But Daniel had already begun walking to the furthest wall. A
sliver of light reflected softly on the wall, giving contour to words that had
been etched in the stone.
"Wow,"
Caris said, right behind Daniel. He had brushed off the dust and was tracing
the etchings with his fingers. "Can you read it?" She said, squinting
in the murky lighting.
"Yes,"
He said excitedly, "I think it's instructions...or a warning...or
both?"
"What
does it say?" Collom wondered. Alkin and Meldon had caught up, so that all
their faces glowed and squinted together in the torchlight.
"Behold, Thou dost desire
truth in the innermost being,
And in the hidden part Thou
wilt make me know wisdom.
Purify me with hyssop, and I
shall be clean;
Wash me, and I shall be whiter
than snow...
The sacrifices of God are a
broken spirit;
A broken and a contrite heart,
O God, Thou wilt not despise..."
"What
does it mean?" Collom asked.
"It
doesn't matter, Collom. It obviously doesn't help us." Alkin added.
"It
sounds interesting though, what do you think Daniel?" Meldon turned to
Daniel who held the torch.
"Well,
I'm not sure right away. Let me think." He responded
"What
about the map's instructions?" Caris thought. "Didn't the first verse
say 'our hearts break with Him in daily pieces...? I don't know what it means,
but this reminds me of "a broken and contrite heart."
"I
think you're on to something Caris." Daniel pondered, "the next line
was, 'and still he breaths in us new graces...' and that reminds me of 'purify
me...and I shall be clean; wash me, and I shall be whiter than snow...' maybe this is a piece of the
tribe's ancient songs!"
"Wow.
It sounds beautiful," Collom observed.
"Why
would they have this at the entrance of the cave?" Alkin questioned.
"It seems depressing."
"Or
honest."
Caris jeered.
"Let's
go further in." Daniel suggested. "Whoever wrote this only wrote a
piece of it for some reason. I'm sure there's more ahead."
They
all moved forward at Daniel's suggestion. In the left-most corner of the cave,
the found low ceiling that allowed them to move into another room. It had a
high ceiling, with steep walls. There was a ray of light shining down into the
middle of the floor. The all slowly moved toward the dry light.
"It
must be a tiny hole...it's so far up!" noted Meldon, arching backwards.
"It
makes the room so much brighter though," said Caris. She played with the
ray of light, moving her hand from dark to light to dark again. "I can see
the dust dancing in the light, it's really amazing." Collom came over and
played the light-game with her.
"Let's
keep moving guys," Alkin recommend, "I'd rather not be in here, when
that light goes dark." They nodded, and continued to explore the room,
until Daniel beckoned them further.
"There's
a hallway here!" He said, "I think it takes us further down..."
"Down?"
Meldon gulped. "I didn't think we were going down."
"You
can hold mommy's hand if you'd like," Alkin pointed to Caris.
"He's
fine,
Alkin." Caris said. "Aren't you Meldon?" She looked at him.
He
smiled. "I think so...I just can’t help talking my thoughts out
loud." He said
"No
kidding," added Alkin.
"I
wouldn't talk if I were you, Alkin" Caris retorted, "Your mouth has
gotten you in trouble more than once."
"Come
on' everyone, let's keep going!" Daniel's voice echoed from yards down the
tunnel. They all bumbled ahead—Meldon carrying the rear. They trekked forward
in quiet—their rhythm of scrapes and clomps being the only sounds. The hallway
was getting tighter and tighter, until they had to walk with their backs
scrunched down. This made them all very uncomfortable. It was a long while
before anyone said anything. Alkin spoke up first.
"I
thought you had said there would be more, Daniel." He complained.
"How do we know we're going anywhere important? This could be the wrong cave
for all we know."
"The
wrong cave?" Meldon shuttered, "But we've already gone so far...if
this is wrong..."
"We
could be lost."
Collom finished his sentence.
"We're
not lost," Caris claimed, "We have been going one direction the whole
time. So when we leave, we can just head back the same way..."
"Did
anyone see this?"
Meldon screeched. He was tracing the walls and ceilings with his fingers. Caris
and Collom touched them too.
"There
just rough," Alkin balked, "what's the big deal."
"No,
it's not just rough..." Caris observed, "Meldon is on to something.
Daniel, come here with your torch!" Daniel squeezed through Collom and
brought the light close to the wall. "Oh my," Caris drew a breath.
"Look!"
Collom gasped.
"Does
anyone have another torch? We need more light." Daniel ordered.
"I
have some kindling," Collom suggested. They ignited it with the torch, and
soon the whole cave was lit brightly. The flames danced, and the hallway was
covered entirely with exquisite and beautiful etchings similar to the entrance.
"We've
been walking over these carvings the whole time?" Meldon wondered.
"Yes!"
Daniel exclaimed, "Remember the map, 'in our songs our rhythm our
words, stand prayers to Yahweh with voices unheard" These are the prayers of
the ancient tribe. They are unheard, because they carved them in stone!
"It's
amazing." Caris said. They all were filled with wonder. "And
remember, 'And in the darkness, we know we can trust Him cause darkness and
light are alike to Him.' We've been hiking through this dark, uncomfortable cave...not
knowing the whole time we were surrounded by these prayers."
"I've
never imagined anything like this." Meldon added, "The elder council
will never believe it."
"They
never believe anything," Alkin added.
"Hey
everyone! I found the prayer from the entrance! The words are exactly the
same...but the whole song is here!" said Collom. They all stood back
reading the ancient words in flickering light.
Psalm 51
For the choir director.
A Pslam of David,
When Nathan the prophet came
to him,
After he had tone in to
Bathsheba.
Be gracious to me, O God,
according to Thy loving-kindness;
According to the greatness of
Thy compassion blot out my transgressions.
Wash me thoroughly from my
iniquity,
And cleanse me from my sin.
For I know my transgressions,
And my sin is ever before me.
Against Thee, Thee only, I
have sinned,
And done what is evil in Thy
sight,
So that Thou art justified when Thou dost speak,
And blameless when Thou dost
judge.
Behold, I was brought forth in iniquity,
And in sin my mother conceived
me.
Behold, Thou does desire truth
in the innermost being,
And in the hidden part Thou
will make me know wisdom.
Purify me with hyssop, and I
shall be clean:
Wash me and I shall be whiter
than snow.
Make me to hear joy and
gladness,
Let the bones which Thou hast
broken rejoice.
Hide Thy face from my sins,
And blot out my iniquities.
Create in me a clean heart, O
God,
And renew a steadfast spirit
within me.
Do not cast me away from Thy presence,
And do not take Thy Holy
Spirit from me.
Restore to me the joy of Thy
salvation,
And sustain me with a willing
spirit.
Then I will teach transgressor
Thy ways,
And sinners will be converted
to Thee.
Deliver me from blood
guiltiness, O God, thou God of my salvation:
Then my tongue will joyfully
sing of They righteousness.
O Lord, open my lips,
That my mouth may declare Thy
praise.
For Thou doest not delight in
sacrifice,
Otherwise I would give it;
Thou art not please with burnt
offering.
The sacrifices of God are a
broken spirit;
a broken and a contrite heart,
O God, Thou wilt not despise.
By Thy favor do good to Zion;
Build the walls of Jerusalem.
Then Thou wilt delight in
righteous sacrifices,
in burnt offering and whole
burnt offering;
Then young bulls will be
offered on Thine alter.
"He
is full of so much passion and remorse. I don't understand all of it, but it
makes so much more sense as a whole," said Daniel.
"Who
do you think 'David' is?" Collom wondered. "Did he write it?"
"Of
course David wrote it...it says it's 'a psalm of David'," Alkin stated.
"I
can't imagine anyone writing something so beautiful," said Caris.
"What is a psalm?" Collom
asked.
"It's
an ancient word for song or poem.” commented Meldon, “The elders still talk
about them once in a while, though I rarely hear them ever sing or recite
anything like David's."
Daniel
remembered his mother's note, "My mother wrote me a note about
interpreting
the map's words." He
unrolled so they could all see, she said, 'what does this tell me about
Yahweh? Remember,
this is Yahweh's story that He wrote to His tribe. He was revealing Himself to
them. Since you have Yahweh's Spirit, you can understand His heart in history.' She's pretty wise. Let's look
at what this tells us about Yahweh..."
"It
says 'Thy loving-kindness; Thy compassion; Thou art justified," Said Collom. "Yahweh
must be loving and fair."
"And
that ‘Thou does desire truth; Thou will make me know wisdom," Observed Caris. "He
must desire honesty and be very wise. And it seems like 'Thou hast broken', means that He is causing David
to experience this brokenness.
"These
phrases, 'Thy presence; Thy Holy Spirit; Thy salvation; Thy ways; Thy
righteousness; Thy praise'," noted Meldon, "These are words I've heard from the
elders, but never with such fervency and fire. I can see why He felt
broken."
"And
it ends with, 'Thou wilt not despise; Thy favor; Thou wilt delight; Thine
alter',"
Added Alkin. "What could Yahweh despise in David?" They all paused,
gathering the dynamic words of the song in their heart.
"Do
you think his brokenness had to do with him 'going in to Bathsheba'?" Alkin wondered. "Who
is she?"
"And
who is Nathan?" Daniel asked, "It seems like this brokenness song
came after David had 'gone in to Bathsheba' and then 'Nathan the prophet
came to him'."
"Well,"
Alkin joked, "What else could happen between a man and a woman?"
"He
seems pretty broken about it after Nathan came." Collom noted. "I
think that is what the song is about—whatever happened between Bathsheba and
David—He must be talking to Yahweh about it."
"It
seems like he feels really bad," said Alkin. "Like he is sucked dry,
with no water to cool his thirst."
"My
mother's note says to, 'Remember what this tells me about Yahweh's story
with the ancient tribe." Daniel proposed. "Maybe Yahweh had already taught them to
come to Him when they've offended him. David says he needs to be 'washed', 'cleansed', 'purified with hyssop' and that he has 'done
what is evil in Yahweh's sight'. But it seems like David can't
clean himself."
"I
think you're right, Daniel," Caris added, "David keeps asking Yahweh
to clean him. He
says, 'deliver me from blood
guiltiness, O God, Thou God of my salvation.’ There must have been some sort of standard that
David broke...he feels guilty even down to his blood! He thinks he has personally
offended Yahweh...he seems really scared and needy. "
"Yea,
it is really personal.” noted Daniel, “Even in the part about sacrifice at the end, it is
about David's 'broken and contrite heart'. I guess Yahweh wanted his tribe to come to Him
when they offended him."
"But
it seems like they can and do come because He will clean them!" Meldon
spurted out, surprised at his own excitement. "All I mean, is that they
wouldn't have come to Yahweh unless He could do something about their
offense—unless they could be reconnected with Him. Otherwise they would just
hide."
"Good
insight, Meldon." Caris affirmed, "That is amazing."
"Do
you think Yahweh really wanted them to come to Him if they personally offended
him?" Alkin timidly asked.
"I
think so, Alkin." Daniel affirmed, "David says that Yahweh 'dost
desire truth in the innermost being, and in the hidden part Thou will make me
know wisdom."
If Yahweh desires truth, I think it means he wants transparency—like the
openness between best friends."
"But
Yahweh is the one David offended!" Collom said, "How could he be
transparent with Yahweh when David knows he offended Yahweh?"
"Because
since he offended Yahweh, Yahweh is the only one who can deal with it. If you
hurt your friend, you need to go to your friend for forgiveness, right? No one
else can do it." Caris spoke from deep thought, "I think it's the
same with Yahweh. Because He is the one who is offended, then He is the only
one who can 'create in me a clean heart...and renew a steadfast spirit
within me...sustain me with a willing spirit...deliver me from blood
guiltiness, O God.’
David wants to have Yahweh forgive Him, so they can enjoy a good relationship
again." Alkin, Meldon and Collom at soaked in her thoughts. Daniel and
Caris just smiled, feeling like Yahweh was a familiar friend to them already.
The ancient song hung in the air and unheard words sang in their hearts.
"This
whole hall way is filled with these songs! I can't even imagine how many
amazing things each of them says." said Daniel.
"Neither
can I." gasped Meldon. "I wish the elders could read these."
"Look,"
Caris said, "The next song is right here, it says, 'Psalm 52'...we must
have already trekked through fifty songs! I wonder how many more there
are?"
"Well,
not to ruin the moment," sobered Alkin, "but this doesn't mean we're
any closer to fresh water, or to finding a way out. The song is nice, but it
isn't really helping us get further."
"Does
the map have any suggestions about what to do from here?" Meldon asked.
"No,"
Daniel answered, "It only gave us the ancient tribes notes at the
beginning. I think we have to go ahead and see what Yahweh brings." Daniel
grabbed the torch and they all moved forward, walking over songs after song of
the ancient tribe. Daniel began to notice that there were large divisions
between song 72 and 73, and further on in song 89 and 90, then in 106 and 107.
"I wonder if these songs are divided into sections?" He pondered to
himself, "that would make sense...then each section could tell a story or
cover a certain topic. I wonder if they all tell the story of Yahweh and the
ancient tribe?" He thought this was so wonderful—they could tell Yahweh's story
through songs. "Maybe I'll write a song myself someday, about what Yahweh
has done in my families' life." The thought made him smile. He thought
about his mother's last note, 'What part of this can I carry with me?' There was so much to consider
from their conversation—but in the end, he carried 'Behold, Thou does desire
truth in the innermost being, and in the hidden part Thou will make me know
wisdom." He
started to say the verse in his heart, over and over again. He glanced back and
saw that Caris was in deep thought, too.
Daniel
stopped and turned to share his thoughts with everyone, but Meldon didn't see.
This knocked the whole group
forward. They fell over each other. The rocks gave way under Collom's right
arm—causing a terrible ruckus. Collom grabbed Daniel as he fell. Daniel reached
for Caris. Caris pulled in Alkin. And Alkin yanked Meldon. Meldon screamed.
They all tripped, and slipped, and skidded down a hole of smooth stone. They
howled, terrified of their speed, and completely unable to stop themselves. It
was like a tight, smooth, tube-way, that spun them until they were all dizzy,
and then kept going and going...always further than they imagined it could. It
seemed an unbelievable length until they hit an open air free fall. They splashed
at the bottom into a deep pool.
Chapter 6
Chapter 6
The Room of Wisdom
Daniel
surfaced in a deep breath and saw Caris and Collom beside him. Alkin surface a
second later. And Daniel heard a high pitched wail from a hole in the
ceiling—Meldon shot out and landed safely in the water next to Alkin. They all
helped each other to the black sand shore, near the wall of the cave. Once they
recovered and shook the water out of their ears, they stopped. They were
silenced at the view, and drew wondrous breaths.
"Water!"
Meldon shouted, "Look everyone!"
"We
all saw it Meldon!" Alkin exclaimed, squeezing out his clothes. "We fell in it."
"This
is amazing!" Collom said, "I never have seen anything so
beautiful!"
"The
walls are huge," Caris opened both her arms to mimic its size.
"And
it must be almost a half mile across!" added Daniel. He squinted his eyes,
and
could see the dark water lapping
against the far shore.
"We'll
be stuck in here forever." Meldon said, in exhausted panic.
"We're
all pretty scraped and bruised, too" Caris included.
"At
least we have water," Collom smiled, "And lots of it."
"Too bad we can't do anything with
it." Alkin groused, "Rather than die of dehydration,
we'll starve!"
"Ohh..."
Meldon groaned, filled with worry.
"We
won't be stuck forever," Caris explained, "There's a reason we can
see without the
torch in here. There is light
somewhere, and where there is light, there is an exit."
"Look.
Everyone, let's fill our water jugs first. Then we'll decide what to do."
Daniel
instructed. They all went to work
filling their jugs, and drinking till their stomachs hurt. This put them in a
much better mood altogether. None of them said, but they all wondered about how
they would ever get all this water to their tribe. This problem was not the
first they needed to tackle.
After
this Daniel proposed, "I have an idea. It looks like the water is pretty
shallow on the far end of the lake. Why don't we tread through the shallow
water as best we can and see if we can make it to the far side. That way, we
can gain some perspective, and if it doesn't work, we can just camp here for
the night. And, as Alkin observed, at least we won't die of thirst." He
laughed.
They
all moved forward with whatever leftovers they had after their fall—which was very
little. As they sloshed through the low waters, Meldon spied something on the
far shore. "Look everyone! There are scrolls over there!" He pointed
excitedly, and they all picked up the pace. In a few minutes they reached the
scrolls—there were hundreds of them! The shore they arrived at was a bit
lighter, and it was very easy to see the words in the cave's natural light.
Yahweh possessed me at the
beginning of His way,
Before His works of old
From everlasting I was
established
From the beginning, from the
earliest times of the earth.
When there were not depths I
was brought forth,
When there we not springs
abounding with water.
Before the mountains were
settled,
Before the hills I was brought
forth;
While He had not yet made the
earth and the fields,
Nor the first dust of the world.
When He established the
heavens, I was there,
When He inscribed a circle on
the face of the deep,
When He made firm the skies
above,
When the springs of the deep
became fixed,
When He set for the sea it
boundary,
So that the water should not
transgress His command,
When He marked out the
foundations of the earth;
Then I was beside Him, as a
master workman;
And I was daily His delight,
Rejoicing always before Him,
Rejoicing in the worked, His
earth,
And having my delight in the
sons of men.
Now therefore, O sons, listen
to me,
For blessed are they who keep
my ways.
Heed instruction and be wise,
And do not neglect it.
Blessed is the man who listens
to me,
Watching daily at my gates,
Waiting at my doorposts.
For he who finds me finds
life,
And obtains favor form Yahweh.
But he who sins again me
injures himself;
All those who hate me love
death.
"Wow,
this one is different!" Daniel said. "It still sounds like a song,
though."
"Who
are they talking about?" Meldon wondered, "I get that Yahweh 'possessed' someone...but who was it?"
"Yea,
it seems more like a riddle," said Caris. "But it definitely has to
do with the beginning of the world."
"How
do you know that?" Alkin questioned.
"Because,
Alkin, look at the words: it says 'the beginning' two times, 'before' three times, 'when there were not' twice, and says 'of old', 'everlasting' and 'the earliest times of
the earth' once.
It is obvious that whoever this is, there were around when Yahweh created the
earth."
"Yahweh
created the earth?" Meldon wondered, "I never thought of it like
this, so delicate and powerful."
"Yes,
we can tell it was Yahweh creating because the beginning says 'Yahweh
possessed me at the beginning of His way' and then later says that whomever was there, was around
when Yahweh 'He had not yet made the earth; He established; He inscribed; He
made; He set; He marked." Whoever this is, they were around along time ago. They are
even more ancient than the tribe who wrote this." They all thought for
awhile about how long ago all this happened.
"Who
could be around before the world was created?" bursted Alkin. "That
doesn't make any sense. There can't be people before the earth."
"Well,
maybe it's not about a person," suggested Caris. "What do you
mean?" wondered Collom. "Well,
maybe it's someone or something Yahweh would have used when He created."
"This
is impossible to understand..." Meldon complained, "I think my head
is going to
explode."
"I
don’t think..." Daniel said, "The ancient tribe wouldn't have written
it down if they thought it was impossible to understand."
"Well,
I'm stumped." Said Alkin.
"I
am too," said Caris.
"Me
too," said Collom and Meldon.
"I
have one more clue." Said Daniel, “Remember the song from the map,
Caris...
Even in this we breathe His
knowledge unending
how in wisdom he created all
of the earth
she is the one who shared in
his structure
and it's through her that we
find His worth.
“I think that the one who created
with Yahweh is ‘Wisdom”
“What
do you mean?” Collom thought.
“I
think it means that Yahweh created the earth with ‘Wisdom’.” Caris exclaimed. “Like every
inch of it. The structure of the mountains. The bright skies. The rolling
hills. The fields. The springs. Even the dust. It was all created by Yahweh
using ‘Wisdom’”
“So
everything is infused with Yahweh’s wisdom?” Meldon asked.
“I
think that is what it is saying.” Daniel reflected.
“Does
that mean that these caves and the lake is infused with His wisdom.”
“I
guess so.” affirmed Caris.
“Does
that mean that we are infused with His wisdom too?” Alkin added a profound
point.
“I
don’t feel very wise.” Collom exclaimed.
“I
don’t think he means that, Collom” Daniel said, “I think he means our
structure, and our world, was put together in wisdom. So it has the mark of
God’s wonderful skill and understanding in all of it.”
“It
doesn’t make you
smart,” joked Alkin. “It just means that you are created by someone smart.”
“Everything
I look at is now so profound!” Meldon shouted, “Everything has Yahweh’s wisdom
in it!” His voice reverberated off
the cavern’s wall. They laughed at his excitement, but knew he was right.
“
Ah, children!” A gruff voice broke the concentration of the five, “You are
doing well! Very well indeed!” All five of them turned around to see a thin,
drawn-faced man, wearing a long, grey garment, wrapped in a magenta belt. He
had worn sandals on his feet. He
had a sparse, white beard, and wrinkles that made his face seem like it was
always smiling. “Children, children. How did you get down here? And how are you
able to understand the ancient words? That takes a lot of skill.” He was a tall
man, and leaned on his staff, and looked them each in the eye with a “humph!”
Daniel spoke first.
“Sir,
my father gave me an ancient map, that he said leads to fresh water. He passed
away recently, and out tribes drought is getting worse. So my friends and I set
out on this adventure to find fresh water, following this map. We were walking
through the hallway of songs, when the rocks gave way, and we found ourselves
down here.”
“Yes,
hah! You stumbled upon the center of the earth,” He laughed to himself.
“The
center of the earth!” Meldon whispered, “I thought we fell far!”
“Is
this really the center of the earth, sir?” Caris question him.
“Oh,
no.” he said. “That is just what I call it. It is my room of wisdom. And you
have found its treasures.”
“How
do you know about these scrolls?” Threatened Alkin, “We found these scrolls and
this water through Daniel’s map!”
“Oh,
these!” He laughed again at his impertinence. “These have been here longer than
I. They are very old. As old as the rocks, I’d say!”
“Yes,
I think so,” Daniel added, “for these rocks and this whole cavern was formed by
Yahweh in wisdom.”
“Mighty
insight, for a little one.” The man gestured to Daniel, and talked to the other
four. “He must be the leader.”
“So
what if he is!” Boasted Caris. “At least we have a leader—who are you? Just
wandering around in a cave by yourself. That’s pretty suspicious!”
“And
the little lady can bark.” He said to the other four. Then turned and stared
here in the eyes. “My child, you are a wonderfully brave creature.” Caris
didn’t know whether to attack or blush. He continued, “My little friends, I am
a prophet of the northern tribes. They have banished me for saying
things—certain things pertaining to your map—and now I wander between the caves
and the tribe. My only desire, and this I seek, is to tell forth all that
Yahweh wants to say to His people!”
“So
you are a vagrant!” blamed Alkin. Who was immediately ignored.
“Are
you really
homeless?” Asked Collom, with an air of concern.
“I
confess. I am a stranger and an exile here on earth. I look for a better
country” He said, “but there is another who had nowhere to lay his head, and I
make my home with him.”
“What
do you mean?” scoffed Alkin.
“I
think he means he serves Yahweh.” Caris said
“Is
that what you mean, sir?” Asked Daniel
“With
all my heart.” He admitted, “I wander in deserts and mountains and caves and
holes in the ground.” And with this, he got on his knees. “Children, I have
come to give you a gift.”
“Really!”
piped Meldon
“Wow!”
said Collom and Caris. Daniel remained attentive, and Alkin went silent.
The prophet cupped his hand and
said, “In here is something for the five of you. It is extremely precious, and
cannot be taken away once it is received.”
“That
sounds nice,” said Collom and Meldon.
“What
is it?” asked Caris.
All
of them gathered closed to his clasped fingers. He breathed softly on his
hands. Everyone got very quiet. Now, there is only one for all of you, so don’t
be greedy.” he laughed. At this, he opened his hands wide. They all stared, and
saw nothing but his palms.
“What
was that?”
Alkin laughed.
“I’m
confused.” Said Meldon.
“That,
Children” explained the prophet, “Is the gift of faith.”
“I
didn’t see anything.” Alkin and Collom said.
“Faith
is not something you can see” stated the prophet
“Why
there wasn’t anything in there?” Asked Meldon.
“There
was, child, there was much.”
“What
do you mean?” Caris wondered
“Faith
is something you cannot see or hear or touch.” He said softly, “It is only
something you can receive! And it is something you have already explored.
Daniel, didn’t you trust Yahweh to start this journey? And Caris, didn’t you
trust Daniel’s words about Yahweh? And Alkin, didn’t you experience Yahweh in
the Psalm you read? And Collom and Meldon, haven’t you trusted your friends
throughout this adventure? And they all looked around, still expected to see
something. But still it was ordinary them. “You have all had faith in each
other already!” He laughed, “And you have begun to have faith in Yahweh,
haven’t you.” Daniel and Caris nodded, but Meldon, Collom and especially Alkin
still looked sufficiently confused.
“But
if we already had faith, then you didn’t give us anything.” said Caris.
“Oh,
but I have.” the prophet said with a smile. “Now you know you have faith. You hadn’t
thought of it before this, had you?”
Caris
smiled. “No. I hadn’t...thank you. I guess.” She laughed a bit, and Daniel did
too.
“I
still feel confused,” Meldon whined.
“Me
too,” Added Collom.
“You
three will understand in time. Especially you Alkin. You have a lot to think
over, don’t you?”
“I
don’t know what you’re getting at.” He said, “I think I’m just fine.”
“You
are, child.” He nodded, “but you still have a lot to think over. It’ll come.”
He now turned to all of them. “For the time, children, let me show you one
thing about these scrolls. Then we must be going.”
“Going
where?” Asked Meldon.
“Wait,
child. You are full of questions. I will tell you soon.”
Daniel
gave Meldon a comforting look, and Caris smiled at him—putting his fears to
rest for a bit. The Prophet went on to
teach them one very important thing about the scrolls. “If you were able to
climb to the top of this cave and look down—which you can’t so don’t try. You
would see these scrolls are all laid out in a certain order. In fact, all the
scrolls from the ancient tribe are laid out in a specific order, in order to
teach something specific to their tribe. And, if you could get all the scrolls,
from all the locations on the map, and put them in order—they would tell one
grand story about Yahweh and His tribe.” The group nodded, getting a little bit
more of the big picture. “If you understand the larger story of Yahweh, you can
put the scroll in the right part of the story. This will help you to understand
what the
story is about, who wrote the story, and why they wrote it. Without these three things, you could make
any sort of meaning you wanted out of these scrolls. But if you did this, their
teaching would be of no help to you. Do you all understand how important it is
to know the big story?” They nodded again. “Good.” He smiled.
“So
what part of the story is room of wisdom?” Meldon asked
“Good question, little one.” He
said, “These scrolls make up a wonderful genre called “Wisdom”
“That’s
what Yahweh used to create the world!” piped in Collom.
“Right you are, Collom. There are
really four books in this room, Proverbs, Ecclesiastes, Job and Song of
Solomon—and five, if you include the hallway of songs that you fell from. I
cannot explain all of them for now. But let it suffice to say that the room of
wisdom helped the ancient tribe, and can help us, to learn to live wisely and skillfully
within God’s world. That is why I called it the center of the world!” He
laughed. “It’s a little joke of mine. Since everything about wisdom for life
starts in the basics here—it is really the center of everything.” The group
smiled at his silly connection, but they understood that this was really a holy
place.
“So,
this is what the tribe read to learn to live well in the world?” Daniel
attempted to summarize the Prophet.
“Very,
very true, little one.” He smiled, and looked at the group, “No wonder you’ve
chosen this boy to lead.” Caris smiled at Daniel, and Alkin rolled his eyes.
The Prophet added one more thing.
“So
in context of the genre, this section you read, it is about Wisdom being used to form the
entire world. This is what the ancient tribe knew about Yahweh—and so they
thought if they could grow in relationship with Wisdom, they would know Him
better and learn to live in His world. Pretty smart people, right children!”
The smiled. “So when I heard Meldon exclaiming about Yahweh’s wisdom being
everywhere...I knew you were right on track. I had to come visit you.”
“Thanks”
Meldon bashfully said. “I was excited.”
“So
now I will take you to my home.” He announced definitively.
“I
thought you said you were homeless?” Said Alkin.
“I
think that is what you said, child, not I.” He said with a wise look in his eye.
Alkin kept his mouth shut from then on. They followed him and jumped a few
large dark rocks until the met a small stream flowing from the cave. In it
there was a little wooden boat with oars and a lantern. “There is enough room
for five—but since you are children, I can fit all of us.” They all stepped
with questionable looks into the creaking vessel. “It’s not much.” He smiled, “but it holds great treasures.
Like jars of clay!” he laughed to himself. “And it’s better than staying in the
cave, right Meldon?” Meldon awkwardly nodded, and holding onto the wood corner
for dear life. It looked like the waterway snaked forwards towards some sort of
exit. Everyone but Daniel and Caris felt a bit uneasy, rocking back and forth,
and floating down the stream with a prophet who talks to himself. Their boat
ride echoed down the water chamber.
“Where
do you live?” Daniel asked the prophet as he lifted the great oars, “Oh, I live
in the cliffs by the northern tribe.”
“Do
those happen to be the cliffs on my map?” He asked with wonder.
“They
are the same.” smiled the prophet. “Is it much of a surprise to you that we ran
into each other?” He asked
“I
think I’ve stopped believing in surprises.” Daniel smiled.
“That’s
my boy!” Laughed the prophet. “Onward!” He shouted to the cavern. They all
looked forward to see an exit to the cave.
“Wow!”
said Collom, “We’re safe!”
Meldon
turned to Alkin and said, “Funny, you think that the water would flow into the
cave, not out of it.” Alkin nodded
distractedly. “And that we would really have to row our way out of here. But we
don’t, the water from the room of wisdom is carrying us out into the world!”
“That’s
great, Meldon.” Alkin dully responded. But Meldon was caught up in his own
observations.
“Maybe
we really were at the center of the world?” Meldon wondered to the winds that
brushed his face. They floated through the exit onto a stream that carved
through a great canyon. Immense cliff grew on every side of them—higher than
any could see. Breathless sounds of awe and wonder came out as they observed
the fertile land in the canyon and stretched their eyes to see the cliffs-tips.
“This
is where you live?” Caris said excitedly, “It is gorgeous.”
“This
is amazing.”
Daniel agreed.
“We
will be there shortly.” the prophet explained.
Chapter 7
The Prophet’s Home
The
little boat pulled into a small eddy in the stream. They all got out carefully,
and the prophet, who got out last, tied the boat to a small branch to anchor.
He grabbed his staff and beckoned them toward his door. They had to hop and
dance around small dry bushes, and sand, where it looked like the water and
moved up and down over seasons. There was a serene smoothness about the
entrance, and his home. The walked into a low cave, covered with a leather
door, and they saw a meager home. “He might as well be homeless,” thought
Daniel, but kept his observation to himself. There was a small, dry fire,
carved into the wall of the cave. There was also a mat against the far wall,
and some scrolls; “he must sleep there,” thought Daniel. The prophet pulled up
a few stones and logs for each of them to sit on as they gathered around the
fire. Collom helped him light the wood, and blow until the flames were hot. The
group began to talk, and relax in the prophet’s small cave. He invited Alkin
outside—which took some coaxing— and brought some sort of short spear. They
returned a few minutes later with seven or eight fish. “I caught the last two!”
boasted Alkin. Everyone was very excited, and in a short bit they had cooked
the fish and were filled to the brim. The prophet offered some sweet crackers
he had baked the day before—which was a perfect addition to their already full
stomachs.
Before
bed they talked, and told stories. The Prophet shared some really amazing
ones—ones they had never heard before. The ones that struck Daniel were about
the son of Yahweh who came. The Prophet talked about him like he was a close
friend—they all were very curious to find out more about Yahweh’s son. At dusk
the Prophet took Daniel out on his own. They hiked a short way past his home,
and up the cliff-edges. The view overlooked a large amount of tents and wooden
buildings, “This looks like a city!” He thought.
“This
is the northern tribe.” The Prophet explained. “It is because of their
relationship with your tribe that you do not have water now. I wanted you to
see them in the peaceful evening—because tomorrow we will go there, and it will
be like chaos.”
“What
do you mean we will go there?” Daniel wondered
“The
next destination on your map, it’s a tribe, isn’t it”
“Yes.”
Daniel affirmed, “But...I thought.”
“All
of us will go. It has been a long time since I have been home.” He said with a
deep, long, look in his eyes. “I know you just arrived at my home. But there
isn’t much time for your tribe. We must attempt to resolve our differences with
them.” The Prophet sighed.
“Okay,”
Daniel said, and the wondered, “How is it that you know about the map and the
images?”
“Ah,
child.” He smiled, “You pick up on a lot. Your father wasn’t the only one with
a map. Everyone has been given a map like his. Some people have lost theirs,
some have thrown them away. I was given one by my family years ago. But, when I
spoke about it, my family was killed. And my map was lost.” Daniel felt the
deep sorrow in his voice. “Luckily, I had put much of it to memory. I was able
to visit the center of the earth, and enjoyed the hall of songs. I also found
other scrolls of the ancient tribe in these cliffs—but we don’t have time to
look at all of them. They are beautiful though.”
“What
are they like?” Daniel wondered.
“Oh,
unlike anything you’ve ever read.” He reflected, “There are ancient stories of
Yahweh first making the tribe. And then coming to one of them and making a
promise to be faithful to them forever. Their are amazing stories of battles.
Of miracles. Of horrible leaders. And of faithful prophets. Some are narratives- which are historical stories
that have been written down to teach Yahweh to future generations. Some are Law—which are commandments Yahweh
has given for the way His people are to living in relationship with Him. Some
are letters—which
are written to specific people, teaching them something specific about Yahweh
and their tribe. Some are prophesy—written by ancient people like me
who forth-tell the word of God to specific people in the ancient world. Some
are Songs or Poems—like what you read in the hall
of songs. And others are Wisdom—which is told in a variety of ways, in little sayings
called proverbs,
in a conversations called a theodicy, in reflections and even in poetry. There is a last one, which I bet
you may encounter later. It is called apocalyptic—meaning it is a letter or
prophesy or revelation that teaches about Yahweh and the end of the world!”
Daniel’s eyes were glazed at how many scrolls there were, and of such variety.
“Oh my, child there is so much Yahweh has done—and even more than what has been
written. It will take your life to explore it all. But for now, we will visit
the tribe. Tomorrow, Yahweh will give us a great gift.”
“How
do you know?” Daniel asked
“Because,
whenever Yahweh asks us to do something. It will always be good no matter how scary it is.”
Daniel nodded at how personal his friendship was with Yahweh.
“You
trust Yahweh so much.” Daniel said. “I don’t know if I can trust Him like you
do.”
The
prophet laughed, “Oh, Daniel. You don’t have to trust Him as much as I do. Only
I have to do that. You only have to trust Him as much as you do. He has given you enough
already!” Daniel smiled. He had been trusting Yahweh, maybe that gift of faith
really did help him somehow?
“Can
I ask you one last thing?” Daniel said. The prophet nodded. “Are you scared to
see the tribe, since they killed your family?”
The
prophet’s voice saddened, “Yes, Daniel. I am very much afraid. But I am afraid
of one thing more.”
“What?”
wondered Daniel.
“Not
listening to Yahweh when He tells me to go.” The prophet smiled, “I would
rather be with Him in the worst, the be alone in the best.” Daniel nodded, he
really would like to trust Yahweh like that. But he remembered that Yahweh had
given him enough for now. They made the short trek back to the prophet’s home,
and all of them slept hard and quick after their long day. It was a restful
sleep for them all, knowing their slept in a prophet’s home—a prophet of
Yahweh.
Chapter 8
Chapter 8
The Northern Tribe
The
group awoke and packed quickly. Daniel filled Caris in on the conversation
between him and the prophet from the night before. They hiked along the trail
that Daniel had walked last night. The prophet stayed in the back—his thoughts
kept him quiet. Daniel led the group, and they talked excitedly until they
caught sight of the tribe below. The sight was quite different than the night
before. The Prophet explained that the tribe was in the midst of a
celebration. Unfamiliar music and
shouts floated over from the city. Colors and clothes blurred together with
tents. Some groups of people were dancing together. There were fires, and amazing
flavors and smells that met their nostrils. They picked up the pace, all a bit
excited to see what the festival was about. They soon made it to the outside,
and walked slowly into the crowds. “Stay together.” Daniel commanded. And they
did.
They
wove in-between a thousand sights.
Alkin saw a sword-swallower. Meldon saw a fire breather. Collom watch a
man walk across coals. And Caris was caught up in the foreign clothes and
styles the women wore. Daniel kept his eyes out for any sort of clue that Yahweh
had for them. And the Prophet remained in quiet thought.
As
they neared the center of town. Booths of food and drinks met them. A strange
mix of spices, fruits, vegetables, meats and wines spun into fabrics of flavors
and sights. Soon, at the very center, they were came to a large stage, on which
they present shows, and had popular voices speak to the tribe about their ways.
Important men and women gathered around, shouting and applauding the speakers,
and throwing money at them. One man stumbled over his words, and said something
silly, and he was dragged off stage, and thrown into the mud. Daniel watched in
awe at the continual outpouring of new ideas and stories from the stage—it was
overwhelming to him. He looked back at the others, and they too were a confused
and overwhelmed at the energetic speeches and the wealthy listeners. It was a
moment later that Daniel noticed the Prophet was missing. “Where was he? Did
they loose him in the crowds?” But Caris grabbed his attention.
“Look!”
She shouted, pointing to the large stage. “Our friend...” The prophet slowly
made his way onto the stage. People already began to ridicule his tattered
cloak and old sash. “Who wears sandals nowadays!” One of the lauding shouted.
The crowd laughed at the Prophet, and cajoled him to speak, if he knew
how. The prophet closed his eyes,
and lead steadily on his staff. He took a deep breath, and began:
But whatever things were gain
to me, those things I have counted as loss for the sake of Christ. More than
that, I count all things to be loss in view of the surpassing value of knowing
Christ Jesus my Lord, for whom I have suffered the loss of all things, and
count them but rubbish in order that I may gain Christ, and maybe found in Him,
not having a righteousness of my own derived from the Law, but that which is
through faith in Christ, the righteousness which comes from Yahweh on the basis
of faith, that I may know Him, and the power of His resurrection and the
fellowship of His sufferings, being conformed to His death; in order that I may
attain to the resurrection from the dead. Not that I have already obtained it,
or have already become perfect, but I press on in order that I may lay hold of
that for which also I was laid hold of by Christ Jesus.
The crowd was silenced at these
passionate words, spoken with humility and authority. “
“He
must have
lost all things!” One shouted, “Look how poor he is!”
“Yah!”
Said another, “Maybe he lost his mind!” The crowd laughed. They began to jeer at him, making
fun of his words.
“He
is boring!” shouted one
“Who
wants to suffer!”
shouted another.
“Get
him off the stage!” yelled a lady.
“No
one cares about your Christ!”
But
the Prophet stood still and spoke again:
Beloved, do not be surprised
at the fiery ordeal among you, which comes upon you for your testing, as though
some strange thing were happening to you; but to the degree that you share the
sufferings of Christ, keep on rejoicing; so that also at the revelation of His
glory, you may rejoice with exultation. If you are reviled for the name of
Christ, you are blessed, because the Spirit of glory and of God rests upon you.
By no means let any of you suffer as a murder, or their, or evil-doer, or a
trouble meddler; but if anyone suffers as a Christian, let him not feel ashamed,
but in that name let him glorify God. For it is time for the judgment to begin
with the house-hold of God; and if it beings with us first, what will be the
outcome for those who do not obey the gospel of God? And if it is with
difficulty that the righteous is saved, what will become of the godless man and
the sinner? Therefore, let those also who suffer according to the will of God
entrust their souls to a faithful Creator in doing what is right...
As he was finishing, the crowd
began to pick up rocks from the ground and throw them at the Prophet. He was
helpless to defend himself.
“He’s
not moving!’ Caris shouted, “We have to help him!”
“I
don’t know,” Meldon shuttered, “Those people are pretty mean.”
“Their
aim isn’t too good!” Alkin said, as an intoxicated man clocked a person nearby.
“I’m
going up there!” Daniel said, “Follow me”
Caris
pulled Meldon saying, “He just saved us yesterday, and you’re letting him get
pelted!” Meldon followed quickly after them.
Once
onstage, the group froze. People stared at them, and a few kept throwing rocks
at the Prophet—who was on his knees with bruises.
“You
must stop!” Commanded Daniel “People of the northern tribes! Stop!” They halted
to listen to him. And he kneeled next to the Prophet. “I know those words were
from the scrolls. Help me tell them!” the Prophet whispered shortly to Daniel.
The crowd talked in complaint, and the other four stood awkwardly to the side.
Daniel
stood and proclaimed, “People of the northern tribes. This man whom you are
hurting is a prophet of Yahweh. Years ago, his family shared the contents of a
map with you, that told where to find fresh water. In your doubts, your fears,
your unbelief, you put his family to death—thinking they were deceived and
would lead the tribe astray. But
it is you who have gone astray! Look at you today. You are wasting time and
abusing entertainment, when Yahweh is here and wants you to know Him. And you
are dying of drought without Him.
This
prophet is our friend. He saved us yesterday. Took us into his home, fed us and
kept us safe. And now you are stoning him without even caring about a word He
says. It is His words that would give you fresh water, but you are killing him
instead—just like you did his family. And you have stoned the one who would lead
you to life.
The
words he spoke. These are from letters that Yahweh has given. An ancient tribe
wrote these down in letters (epistles) to explain the ways of fresh water to the ancient communities. And
these would bring fresh water to us if we listened and understood the truth of Yahweh
and His son! This prophet has entrusted his life to a faithful creator...yet
who have you entrusted your lives to?”
Daniel
stood heaving in front of a now silence crowd. They had never seen a young man
speak with such passion and zeal. The other four slowly scooted behind Daniel
in support.
“Where
are you from, boy?” Shouted one
“Yes,
where?” shouted another.
“We
are from the southern tribe; the tribe that you cut off from water so many
years ago. Our people are dying too. We have nothing. And our families are
sick. My friends and I set out in search of water, and it has led us here.”
“These
words you speak of,” Shouted one, “Where did you say you got them?”
“We
used a map my father gave us. And it has led us here.” Daniel explained.
“Does
your map look like this?” Another asked, holding up a rolled parchment similar
to Daniel’s.
“Or
like this?” Shouted another, holding up an identical parchment.
“Or
this.”
“Or
this.” shouted four or five other voices. They passed one forward to Daniel,
and after unrolling, noticed that it was an exact match of his father’s map.
“Where
did you get this?” Daniel wondered.
“From
my father,” shouted a man.
“From
my mother,” shouted another. Hundreds of voices echoed back similarly.
“Why
have you not used this maps and gone to find fresh water?” He shouted back to them. They
paused, speechless.
“I
didn’t realize it actually meant anything!” One shouted.
“I
thought it was a parallel to our tribe” Said another.
“I
didn’t really like my mother, so I just forgot about it” Laughed another
“My
father told me it was just a story, and the water didn’t exist.”
“Who
would foster such lies?” Daniel said, “Why do you all believe such foolish
things?”
“I
think they came from the southern tribe!” One man remembered.
“Yes,”
said another, “Your elder council taught our parents long ago!”
“It
was this that caused our tribes to divide!” Another admitted. Daniel was now
the speechless one among them. He looked back at his friends, and they were
just as surprised as him. Caris stepped up.
“People
of the northern tribes. It looks like we have all been equally deceived! Our
parents and grandparents made an awful decision to spread lies to yours, and
then to leave you behind. And you have lived under their lies for so
long—you’ve forgotten you’re deceived! And our tribe has lived without water;
water that you didn’t even know existed. We are all equally lost here. I
suggest that we listen to this prophet, throw off the old lies, and seek the fresh
water together!”
The
crowd slowly murmured, then began to applaud, and even shout. Daniel helped the
prophet to his feet. “Yahweh is working.” Daniel affirmed. “They are finally
hearing His words.” The prophet smiled.
Some
of the tribes-people helped the Prophet down, and brought warm cloths, and
helped to sooth his wounds. They all rested in the tribe leader’s tent; for he
had been watching at the stage. Ad they ate the best of his house that night.
The talked until late in the evening about the words of the letter that the Prophet has spoken. He
explained that the first letter was written by a man named Paul, who was
writing a church in the ancient city of Philipi. They were faithful in caring
for Paul’s needs, and shared his burden to spread the truth of Yahweh’s son to
the world. The second letter was written by a man named Peter who was one of Yahweh’s
son’s closest friends. Peter had written to all the dispersed people throughout
Pontus, Galatia, Cappadocia, Asia and Bithynia—all ancient cities where people
began to follow Yahweh’s sons. The tribe leader soaked all of this in—asking
question after question.
The
prophet explained that the letters were always structured in a similar pattern, so that
interpretation was fairly clear. The letter has five parts, a greeting,
thanksgiving, a body, a moral exhortation and a closing. As long as he
discovered the author, the ancient audience, the topic and the message
throughout it, then he could understand the meaning of the letter. Once he
understood what the author meant to tell the ancient audience, then he could
gather some meaning for his own life. This often led him to fresh waters. Everyone was impressed at the
Prophet’s wisdom in understanding the scrolls. But he emphasized, that is why
everyone in the tribe has a map, so that they can interpret the scrolls on
their own. Everyone is easily able to enjoy the fresh water.
Daniel
was amazed at everything that transpired that night. Caris sat next to him,
just as eagerly attentive, and equally glad to be with him. The group laughed
and felt surprisingly safe in such an unknown place. They stayed with the tribe
leader that night. They were thankful to not need to think of their plans for
tomorrow, and excited about sharing the fresh water.
Epilogue
Epilogue
Daniel
and his friends followed the Prophet to fresh water, near the prophet's home. Many
of the northern tribes people settled in the Prophet’s land. They slowly made
trips over to the southern tribes people, bringing fresh water with them every time. Many in the
southern tribe saw the abundance and joined the cliff-dwellers. The first of
these was Tania and Daniel’s mother.
Eventually Caris’ family came, and they drank deep of the new waters,
and enjoyed new love and care between them. Meldon became a long-time-trekker,
making the journey between the northern and southern tribes hundreds of times.
He specifically brought fresh water to the elder council, and slowly they began to see the
lies they had spread. Some even returned with him to live among the cliff-dwellers.
Collom became a premier architect after his disaster in the caves. He spent
years learning about rocks, and building homes for the cave dwellers that were
safe and near to the fresh water. He eventually took a wife for himself from the northern
tribe, and they are building a family next door to the Prophet.
Alkin
remained for years in the northern tribe area. Enjoying, what the Prophet had
called ‘fleeting treasures’. It was years before Daniel and Caris convinced him
to return to the cliffs. Not until long past the time where Daniel and Caris
were married and had children, did Alkin return at the beckon of their son,
whom they had named “David” after the songwriter they loved so much. One night
they all spent with the Prophet, who passed away very content, next to the fresh
waters, and
thanked Daniel and Caris for their long friendship before returning to Yahweh
and His son.
An Unknown Visitor
An Unknown Visitor
Daniel
awoke in the middle of the night to a voice that beckoned him outside. He
followed it, until it let him outside the tribe, to the desert dunes.
Everything seemed dreamlike. Sand blew softly across his face, and the night
felt cold and dry. A few dunes away, Daniel saw a wooden door, standing
alone. He walked over to it, and
opened it. He could see all the way through. He walked through it and closed
the door behind him. Everything remained the same.
In
that same moment light burst in front of him—blinding his eyes.
“Daniel!”
A strong voice said. Daniel fell to his knees at the blinding light.

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